Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say– why you thought about him/her– describe the furniture– suggest a way for him/her to get it

Essay topics:

Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say
– why you thought about him/her
– describe the furniture
– suggest a way for him/her to get it

Hello Raj,

How are you? I think everything is fine there.I am writing an epistle about my promotion and furniture.Actually,I bought new furniture last month because i thought that i will be doing job there for a long time.But Now I got promotion which has been pending for last two years.Now Company give me tranfer order to my home town.my all family live in my native city .Therefore it is very beneficial for me.

Due to this reason I will move next sunday because i will join the branch on Monday.Moreover I have complete new furniture and you told me last time you want to buy new furniture and you also like my furniture.If you don't mind you can get it everything which you want.Because rest of item i will shift to all rest of items in sunday.I have one king size bed,Dinning set with six chairs and a long closet.So i wish that Please you would choose any thing in these items.
I arrange a labour for loading if you want to these items.you come here on sunday and load it in your Van.it will be easy for you because labour will available on that day.If you have no need these items,I will transfer it. I am waiting your prompt response as soon as possible.

Thanking you.
Yours Sincerely
Ram

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e you? I think everything is fine there.I am writing an epistle about my promotio...
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...pistle about my promotion and furniture.Actually,I bought new furniture last month becau...
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...bout my promotion and furniture.Actually,I bought new furniture last month because...
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...bought new furniture last month because i thought that i will be doing job there ...
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...iture last month because i thought that i will be doing job there for a long time...
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...will be doing job there for a long time.But Now I got promotion which has been pend...
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Suggestion: Now
...ich has been pending for last two years.Now Company give me tranfer order to my hom...
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...own.my all family live in my native city .Therefore it is very beneficial for me. ...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...n.my all family live in my native city .Therefore it is very beneficial for me. Due to...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...n.my all family live in my native city .Therefore it is very beneficial for me. Due to...
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... reason I will move next sunday because i will join the branch on Monday.Moreover...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...ecause i will join the branch on Monday.Moreover I have complete new furniture and you t...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...ecause i will join the branch on Monday.Moreover I have complete new furniture and you t...
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Suggestion: If
...urniture and you also like my furniture.If you dont mind you can get it everything...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
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...urniture and you also like my furniture.If you dont mind you can get it everything...
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...e and you also like my furniture.If you dont mind you can get it everything which yo...
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Suggestion: Because
...ou can get it everything which you want.Because rest of item i will shift to all rest o...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ou can get it everything which you want.Because rest of item i will shift to all rest o...
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...ing which you want.Because rest of item i will shift to all rest of items in sund...
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Suggestion: I
...ll shift to all rest of items in sunday.I have one king size bed,Dinning set with...
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...items in sunday.I have one king size bed,Dinning set with six chairs and a long closet.S...
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Suggestion: So
...g set with six chairs and a long closet.So i wish that Please you would choose any...
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Suggestion: I
...et with six chairs and a long closet.So i wish that Please you would choose any t...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
....So i wish that Please you would choose any thing in these items. I arrange a labour for...
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Suggestion: If
...cause labour will available on that day.If you have no need these items,I will tra...
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Suggestion: , I
...that day.If you have no need these items,I will transfer it. I am waiting your pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, i think, mind you

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50226244344 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64990758261 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642533936652 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 178.001375826 44.8134815571 397% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.833333333 76.5299724578 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.8333333333 16.8248392259 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 4.34317383033 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 2.54639175258 1021% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21370318217 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103924993302 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540401073186 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142616254788 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272796562069 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 8.37731958763 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.