Write a letter to a friend telling them about an interesting website you found Tell your friend How you found it How it can help How you use it

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I just wanted to share with you an interesting website that I happened to come across lately.

Yesterday, while I was doing a search about gene structure on Google for my thesis, a site popped up first on the result pages, saying that it allows user to analyze their genetic origins just by uploading their facial image. It must be reliable as it is part of a research conducted by the University of Cambridge about using AI technology to identify human genetic traits based on facial features.

The site might be useful for you to learn about your possible genetic heritage. For example, you can learn that you might be 50% African, 40% Asian, and 10% American based on their analysis. Considering that you have always been wondering how mixed you are in terms of races, this could somehow help you a lot in learning more about your origin.

To use the website, you need to visit this link: www.humanface.com; on which you must create your own account. Subsequently, you will be asked to select a picture file on your hard-drive and upload it onto the site. The website will break down your image to pick up details on your face that match with several typical races on Earth. It will then give you a thorough analysis of the proportion of each genetic trait that you have on a scale of 100.

Let me know if you need any help, you might be surprised with the result!

Your friend,
Tony

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61328125 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44147499903 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8558664654 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4166666667 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359151656612 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147433485007 0.0766984524023 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083958656732 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201881299091 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100764049717 0.0580467560999 174% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.