Dear Chets,
Its lovely to hear from you after so many months! What a lovely decision you have made to visit India, its my mother land! Since this is the first time ever you are visiting my country, I want to tell you that the best time to visit India is during the winter season, which starts from mid October to end of February. This is quite a pleasant period in the entire country where the temperature in north can dip up to -5/-10 degree Celsius, which is mainly in Kashmir alone, though most of the north and east India temperature can easy range between 0 to 10 degree Celsius. . Its rather easier to be in West and South where temperature is relatively bearable and warm.
In this season there is plethora of options for tourists, especially for foodies! As I know you have love for snow falls, beautiful rivers and valleys, I recommend you visit Shimla which is in Himachal Pradesh, this will be an apt choice for you. If you come in December, I can join you for a brief holiday to this beautiful and scenic hill station. We can go trekking, skiing and rafting, what fun it'd be! We'll revel in nature's best.
My work obligations are bit easier towards year end, please visit my home when you come down. Mom has not seen you since our school days, as my home too is in North of India, in Punjab, we can indulge in winter delicacies together and wander around country side of this beautiful city.
Can't wait to see you soon!
Lots of love.
Sheena
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... decision you have made to visit India, its my mother land! Since this is the first...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: FIRST_TIME_EVER[1]
Message: Use simply 'first time'.
Suggestion: first time
..., its my mother land! Since this is the first time ever you are visiting my country, I want to ...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
... the best time to visit India is during the winter season, which starts from mid October to end o...
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Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y range between 0 to 10 degree Celsius. . Its rather easier to be in West and So...
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Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ange between 0 to 10 degree Celsius. . Its rather easier to be in West and South w...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...tures best. My work obligations are bit easier towards year end, please visit m...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...country side of this beautiful city. Cant wait to see you soon! Lots of love. ...
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Line 13, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...see you soon! Lots of love. Sheena
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47955390335 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2200266932 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.5224274944 44.8134815571 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.888888889 76.5299724578 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 16.8248392259 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145151510461 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558970878883 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521683437508 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764335550227 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465908351146 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 8.62886597938 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 8.15463917526 331% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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