Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time.
- Tell him the best time of the year to come.
- What places they could visit
- Invite them to come to your house
Dear Ankur,
How are you? I hope you're well. As per chatting last week, You told me about your visit to my country in the summer and I'm writing this letter to you to give some suggestions.
In my country summer is the best season for visit seaside places and in summer there are many tourist spot which are famous for naturalistic.That's why summer is the best time period to visit my country.
There are so many beaches in my country but, Goa is the very popular for beaches.In Goa all beaches are well maintained and cleaned also, Goa's restaurant famous for tasty foods and architecture design. Also there is one hysterical old Church in my city and I think you like to visit it.
So, You don't need to worry about for live because I reside in Goa city and you can stay in my flat. I heartily welcome to my flat and I wish you will enjoy your time in my city. I have some work during your visit but, I will try to join with you.
If there is anything else I can do, just let me know.
Best Wishes,
Mayur Doriwala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Ankur, How are you? I hope youre well. As per chatting last week, You to...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...r visit to my country in the summer and Im writing this letter to you to give some...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'spots'?
Suggestion: spots
...es and in summer there are many tourist spot which are famous for naturalistic.Thats...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thats
... spot which are famous for naturalistic.Thats why summer is the best time period to v...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... spot which are famous for naturalistic.Thats why summer is the best time period to v...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ut, Goa is the very popular for beaches.In Goa all beaches are well maintained and...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...or tasty foods and architecture design. Also there is one hysterical old Church in m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... think you like to visit it. So, You dont need to worry about for live because I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29743589744 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26992456437 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574358974359 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3778144498 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1818181818 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199875513781 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762401064684 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609410811649 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106228561114 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699192120371 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.