Write a letter to a friend whose birthday party you missed. In you letter include
An apology
Why you missed it
Questions about how fun it was
Dear Emma,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. Here’s wishing you a very happy, albeit belated, birthday!
I cannot apologize enough to you for missing your birthday party. I was really looking forward to spending some quality time with you, but unfortunately, something came up at the last minute. I do hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me.
The reason I was unable to attend was my fault, and a very foolish one at that. In my eagerness to get home and to your party, I met with a car accident. Although it was a minor one, the paramedics that arrived insisted that I be taken to the hospital. By the time I was given a clean bill of health, it was well past midnight, so I just headed home.
Whenever you can, do write to me and tell me how you liked the Harry Potter theme we had organized. Did we manage to do your favorite book justice? I hope all the decorations and the games were a lot of fun, and you had a marvelous time.
I hope we can meet up sometime and I get to make it up to you soon!
Warm wishes,
Cathy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 193, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., something came up at the last minute. I do hope you can find it in your heart ...
^
Line 6, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...up at the last minute. I do hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19902912621 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33398239988 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1286697891 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5384615385 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320008554882 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112547593964 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896037286743 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181430464337 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102874761464 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.