Write a letter to friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
1. Apologize for damaging the product
2. Explain what happened
3. Say how are you going to fix the issue.
Dear Albert,
Sorry it’s taken me so long to write to you but at last I put pen to paper to explain why I haven’t returned that DIY book I borrowed from you.
To be honest, I’ve been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I have to own up that damaged the book accidentally. I am very sorry. I know how important that book is to you as it was passed down from your late father.
What happened is that I had been reading up on the chapter DIY plumbing when I knocked over my cup of coffee which splashed all over the book. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at that time.
I’ve sent the book away to be repaired. I didn’t realize that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it back next week and then I’ll sent it on to you.
Again I’m Sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me.
Best Wishes,
Daniel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the book accidentally. I am very sorry. I know how important that book is to you ...
^
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'll' requires the base form of the verb: 'send'
Suggestion: send
...n I get it back next week and then I’ll sent it on to you. Again I’m Sorry for the ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.07182320442 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1034855032 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635359116022 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6606258051 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.6923076923 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219606727434 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654416745716 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617940374297 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119537680338 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721276866395 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.73 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.