Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
1. Apologize for damaging the product
2. Explain what happened
3. Say how are you going to fix the issue
Dear Emily,
Hope everything is fine. I am writing this letter to apologize for what I have done to your laptop.
As you may remember, I borrowed your device last week for my studies in the engineering class. Since the software in your gadget was required for the class, it helped me a lot to comprehend the topic. However, I am deeply sorry that the laptop is no longer usable because of my fault.
It was broken after it was fallen to the road while I was travelling to school by bicycle three days ago. When I went home, I realized that the screen of the product was broken into pieces. After I took the item to the repairman, he told me that the cost of replacing the screen was more expensive than the laptop itself, therefore it was not logical to get the item repaired.
Yesterday, I bought a brand new laptop same as your old one, and I want to bring it to you tomorrow if you are available.
I look forward to hearing from you regarding your availability,
Best Wishes,
Ali Larter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng from you regarding your availability, Best Wishes, Ali Larter
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47027027027 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4364171566 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632432432432 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9577529888 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170778343881 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712586465522 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847230995412 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12221100512 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707087607965 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.