Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
1. Apologize for damaging the product
2. Explain what happened
3. Say how are you going to fix the issue
Hi Karan,
I hope the letter reaches you in the best of health. The purpose of writing is to let you know that the bluetooth speaker which i had borrowed from you is damaged. I am very sorry for your loss that is caused because of me. I am feeling guilty for damaging your favourite thing.
It all happened in a fraction of a second. I had a party at my place and was playing songs on the speaker. One of my friend was impressed by the features of it , so he asked me if he can check the speaker. I handed over the speaker to him and he was looking at the functions the device offer. Later on while he was keeping the device on the edge of the cupboard it fell down and the volume button stopped working.
I was not having the guts to tell you about the speaker upfrontly. I tried fixing up the speaker by showing it to the technician but no success.I know it was very close to you as it was a gift from your parents. I will get you a brand new bluetooth speaker soon. Please accept my apology.
Yours loving,
Ravina
- You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you were at the restaurant, describe the problems and write about the a 73
- Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.1.Apologize for damaging the product2.Explain what happened3.Say how are you going to fix the issue 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...u know that the bluetooth speaker which i had borrowed from you is damaged. I am ...
^
Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... playing songs on the speaker. One of my friend was impressed by the features of ...
^^
Line 9, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...iend was impressed by the features of it , so he asked me if he can check the spea...
^^
Line 13, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ing it to the technician but no success.I know it was very close to you as it was...
^
Line 13, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing it to the technician but no success.I know it was very close to you as it was...
^
Line 13, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...you as it was a gift from your parents. I will get you a brand new bluetooth spea...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.195 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25895849735 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4185670112 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.9285714286 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202466318838 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675352520109 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668818749463 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147674182656 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105258144846 0.0580467560999 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.