Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
give details of when you would be available for this work
You should write at least 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
Undersign is MBA student in the "City College of Business", which is situated 3 kms from your hospital. As per the college curriculum, I need to write an assignment on administrative management, and from the college website I have come know that there is a requirement in administrative department on temporary basis in your hospital.
As I have good analytical skills and proficient in excel, I am a good candidate for the post as per job description. It is my humble request to shortlist me for the post if my skills are suitable for the post. Moreover, I have no issue if there is no pay for my work. In fact, this job would help me in two ways: to get proper exposure for my assignment, and to get an experience prior to my full time job offer.
My third term will be over by end of this month, and from the 1st day of the next month I will be available job this temporary job.
Kindly look into my candidature request, and will be waiting eagerly for your response.
Yours faithfully,
Bibhu Kalita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...t, and to get an experience prior to my full time job offer. My third term will be ove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, third, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58510638298 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91438883655 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2012709978 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129345907739 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516907015984 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230555459575 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750385485206 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114228798874 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.