Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate.
Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the excellent quality of services provide by your restaurant La Meridian last Monday on the occasion of my birthday.
I would like to thank you for the best hospitality provided by your restaurant, Moreover, I am pleased that you managed us to provide a seating place that is quiet and away from the crow. Additionally, I am very grateful that you staff member even organised a birthday cake for me.
We were mesmerized with the overall ambience of the dining place. It was perfectly decorated with beautiful lightings. The waiters behaved in a polite and professional manner. They suggested us the food we should order by understanding our tastes. The food was delicious and well presented.
I was very satisfied after visiting your restaurant; however, I would like to suggest you to please provide some discount cards or offers on corporate cards as this will make our dine outs more pocket friendly.
I would like to thanks you once again for making my birthday a success.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'thank'.
Suggestion: thank
...more pocket friendly. I would like to thanks you once again for making my birthday a...
^^^^^^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01098901099 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79455972602 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664835164835 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.969847581 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9090909091 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0936816635158 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334596320958 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355579677733 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507165491693 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362047896715 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.