It is necessary for a big company to run cheap restaurant in their premises, as it helps most of the staff member to buy their lunch from there. Most of the staff members are having issue with their lunch as there spouse is also working, and they do not have enough time to prepare a lunch. The company might set up childcare facility on the upper floor of the building as it is vacant and there is no use for that place. However, this restaurant not only feed staff of the company, but also provide foods to local people, who have lower income, and cannot afford high priced food on daily basis.
Apart from this, the restaurant also provide employment to 20 people daily, while childcare home need only 4 employees to run its operation. Within 1kilometer of office premises, there are 2 big daycare facilities available, which will help the staff member to take admission of their children to take care of them, while they are on job. As per my concern, I also took admission of my child in one of them childcare home, which provides great facilities and amenities.
The company should drop the idea of childcare facility and continue the operation of restaurant, which will feed many of people daily requirements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...feed many of people daily requirements.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68837209302 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44267981824 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586046511628 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 21.6473872557 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.0 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0182663861335 0.216113520407 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00892126828536 0.0766984524023 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0127804262203 0.0603063233224 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0146836372859 0.12726935374 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00529913996446 0.0580467560999 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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