Write a letter to the manager of the hotel where you stayed. Write about member of staff who helped you to solve a problem.
Introduce yourself,
Explain the situation,
What was the problem and who fixed it?
Offer to reward and the person in a certain way.
Dear Mr. Vishal,
My name is Manmohan deep Singh and last week, I was on vacations for three days in Mumbai which I spent by staying in your hotel with my family. I want to thank to you and your team for making our trip rememberable and enjoyable. I specially want to thank Mr. Rahul for his work and service consideration for my family.
Actually, what happened as we landed on the airport my mom fell down from the escalators which caused her a really bad fracture on right leg and some wounds on other body parts. It made the whole situation worse as it enabled her to move. We already booked first floor of your hotel but when I talked with Mr. Rahul on phone and explained him the whole situation, he changed our room to ground floor without any extra charges. After reaching at hotel, he called the doctor and provide all medications to my mom, Even the doctors were praising him for his prompt actions. I was afraid that I had to cancel my vocations but his efforts and dedication regarding his work saved my trip.
What he has done for me cannot be paid by money or in any way, but I will feel happy and thankful if you give him the cheque of 500$ that I have attached with this letter as a token of my thanks.
Your sincerely,
Manmohan deep.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$500'.
Suggestion: $500
... thankful if you give him the cheque of 500$ that I have attached with this letter a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33474576271 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29957513906 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631355932203 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1875446943 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.076870037392 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304408032301 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247701879535 0.0603063233224 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604888665526 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171375618196 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.