Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter:
• describe the problems
• explain how these problems are affecting you and others
• suggest what could be done about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a regular user of your transportation service and take especially TTC buses and subways to and from my office. I am writing this e-mail to bring your attention a few critical issues inflicted upon me and other commuters who use your service. I am hoping you would address these issues promptly.
First, during the last couple of weeks, some delays have occurred in Downtown areas. It mostly happened the rush hour time which the most busy hours in the city. Not only the subway, but also some buses that I take for working are not be on time. Due to delay on the subway and late arrival of the Buses, I, my co-workers and people who work in the city may affect their work and their schedule.
To avoid and improve the services, I strongly recommend and suggest re- schedule the bus’s timetables and announce the reason of delays why trains are stopped.
Thank you for giving the matter you attention and I hope to hear your reply soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jones Lee
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a regular user of your transportati...
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...d other commuters who use your service. I am hoping you would address these issue...
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Suggestion: been
...e buses that I take for working are not be on time. Due to delay on the subway and...
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...y affect their work and their schedule. To avoid and improve the services, I str...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...eason of delays why trains are stopped. Thank you for giving the matter you atte...
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...r your reply soon. Yours faithfully, Jones Lee
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6312849162 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36428382815 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68156424581 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8549877553 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118272116814 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435985368744 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323432893188 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637277567109 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412050808446 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.