Write a letter to a restaurant manager to organise a party.
-Why you want to give the party?
-What special arrangements you will need?
- Any relevant question.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am sadhana wale,I am a frequent of your restaurant. I know this restaurant is very popular in Bopal for its testy food and quality.I am writing this letter to you to book restaurant's banquet hall for party on 2nd of April.
The party is on the occasion of my son's first birthday. There will be fifty guests attending this party. Hence food and sitting arrangements need to be done accordingly. I have something in my mind about the decorations.I would like to decorate the cake cutting table with beautiful flowers and the stage shall be decorated by my son's photos, which I will give you.
I also like to decide a menu of the party. In that I would like to add some popular Maharashtrian food items and like to add shrikhand in sweet dish which is my son's favorite dish. I would also request a corner reserved for DJ and the dance floor for the children.
I will be free to discuss the cost of the entire arrangement over the weekend. Kindly let me know a suitable time to visit you at the restaurant on the weekend so that we can discuss these details.
Looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
sadhana.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
Dear Sir/Madam, I am sadhana wale,I am a frequent of your restaurant. I kno...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...in Bopal for its testy food and quality.I am writing this letter to you to book r...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in Bopal for its testy food and quality.I am writing this letter to you to book r...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...l be fifty guests attending this party. Hence food and sitting arrangements need to b...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ething in my mind about the decorations.I would like to decorate the cake cutting...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... sons photos, which I will give you. I also like to decide a menu of the party...
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Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to your response. Yours faithfully, sadhana.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58737864078 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62501094082 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9896149074 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6923076923 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176770435372 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527441902616 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491770059098 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804704612662 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604394718105 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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