Write a letter to Tour Company manager to appreciate your tour guide
Give your Tour details.
What do you like about the tour guide
Suggest ways for the manager to appreciate the guide
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to express my great sense of satisfaction regarding the tour guide Manish, who provided a very appreciative service to us during our tour.
Last week I went to Mustang along with my few acquaintances who are from Canada and the tour guide named Manish, which you hired for us. We were 5 in total headed to Mustang from Kathmandu. The tour package included the Museum, historic buildings, and the local community at Mustang. It was a 5days of a tour in total from 5th to 10th August.
I must show my respect and be admirable for Manish's talent and skills to make the tour enjoyable and memorable. I was amazed by observing his multiple talents, including the skills to describe the places in a perfect way to his multilingual nature where he talks in 6 languages. Furthermore, he was extremely conscious of our needs and did not make our day boring because of his interactive nature.
I believe it is completely difficult to find such an energetic staff in today's time who is totally responsible and loyal to own duties. Therefore, to increase the level of inspiration and satisfaction from this company, you should appreciate him my increasing his remuneration to bonuses so he can work harder for this company.
I hope you understand my words and follow the same.
Yours Faithfully,
Ritu Magar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a perfect way" with adverb for "perfect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...uding the skills to describe the places in a perfect way to his multilingual nature where he tal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86147186147 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84249162272 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8151093365 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5833333333 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238771255813 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078451256975 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780784382888 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120538520923 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10011585486 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.