write a letter to your English speaking friend who is visiting you soon and asking you, what presents your family would like. Write:
Who your family consist of
What kind of presents each member would like
How you feel about your friend coming to visit
Dear James,
I am very excited to hear that you are coming to India next month.
As you asked me about my family members, I would like to inform you that there are five members in my family in which we are three siblings and parents. Moreover, both my siblings are younger than me, one is in the 12th grade whose name is Janki, whereas the youngest one is in the 8th grade whom we called Siddharth.
I would like to recommend few things as you want to give presents to everyone. My parents like to listen religious songs on an audio player, therefore, it would be a better option if you could arrange it. In addition to that, Janki is fond of physics and space related things; hence, I think a portable telescope would amaze her. Lastly, I am sure that my younger brother who is a big fan of an I-pad, so, he would really love to accept I-pad as a present.
When I heard that you are planning to visit India, I was very enthralled. Moreover, I have some ideas in my mind regarding the places where we could enjoy a lot.
I hope, your journey will be safe and enjoyable.
Best regards,
Mohit
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| 2020-02-17 | jotsabghera | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, lastly, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36714975845 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26709576641 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642512077295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.082170701 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1818181818 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256284006586 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847171878181 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733797966321 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11503180219 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371808175785 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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