What distinguishes young people from their parents or grandparents generation is a lack of physical exercise. Today's generation are spending far too long playing computer games, chatting aimlessly on social networking sites or simply watching TV, and too little time being active.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The major difference between parents or grandparents and their descendants is a lack of physical exercise. Longer time is being spent by youngsters to play video games, chatting on Facebook or watching serials on Netflix, therefore, they have lesser time for being active. This essay agrees with the statement because children are heavily relied on technological equipment as well as sedentary lifestyle is another reason for this phenomena.
To commence with, the major difference between youngsters and their parents is the development of technology. That is to say that, as technologies are becoming more advanced in recent times, children are more interesting in playing virtual games, video calling with their kith and kin instead of doing exercise. However, in the past, people had ample of time for exercise and social gathering because they did not have any modern technologies unlike today's generation. For example, a recent survey in Times of India showed a declination in number of people who are doing exercise on daily basis as compared to past fifty years. Therefore, advancement of technology could be a pivotal reason due to which young persons are not doing physical exercise.
Another reason why today's generation are having lack of exercise is sedentary lifestyle. This is because, as in the past, people had to do industrious work by putting their own physical efforts whereas these tedious work-done are being replaced by automation nowadays. Consequently, lesser physical efforts are required in any sort of work due to which they are become lazier as compared to their forefathers. To exemplify, people are using vehicles these days to commute for shorter distance; however, in the past men and women were either preferred to walk or bicycle to go from one place to another. Thus, replacement of hard-work by modern technology could be a reason for the people being less active.
In conclusion, I believe that exorbitant reliance on technology as well as sedentary lifestyle could be the reasons to bolster the notion that youngsters are doing less exercise as compared to previous generation. Furthermore, it is recommended t hat young generation should be guided by their parents that how to use technology effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25555555556 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88011488111 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508333333333 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8597341282 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.133333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171283062984 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668949641323 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536790631245 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108635406143 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197794851651 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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