Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting.
In your letter, you should:
give some details about the job
mention how you came across the job opportunity
explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend
Dear Jini,
Hope you’re doing well. It’s been so long since we last met, but I still remember the great time we had spent together in the hostel last year, when we were studying commerce.
You’d be over the moon to hear that I’ve a very interesting job opening for you, as you have been looking for a job for quite a long time. It’s related to management information systems in a very reputed multinational company Siemens, based in gurgaon. Your job profile would include analysis of management and presentation of data using google sheets.
Actually, one of my friends approached me for this job vacancy, but I've already joined a chartered accountant firm last month and I’ve no intentions to change it in the distant future. So I’d like you to grab this great opportunity, as work timings and salary package is reasonable.
Keeping in mind your exhaustive knowledge of computer softwares latest google sheets, I think you’re the perfect person for this job position, even more deserving than me. Also, it’d involve reporting to senior level management, isn’t it great ? Do let me know what you think.
I can’t wait to hear from you.
Yours lovingly
Ishween kaur
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| 2023-04-11 | c0758910@mylambton.ca | 100 | view |
| 2022-09-28 | Kaur_Aman | 78 | view |
| 2021-09-10 | ishween kaur | 89 | view |
| 2021-01-23 | PRIYANKA1911 | 80 | view |
| 2021-01-23 | ALI77 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jini, Hope you’re doing well. It’s been so lon...
^^^
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t year, when we were studying commerce. You’d be over the moon to hear that I’ve...
^^^
Line 6, column 69, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...approached me for this job vacancy, but Ive already joined a chartered accountant f...
^^^
Line 12, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ait to hear from you. Yours lovingly Ishween kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, look, so, still, well, i think, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6049040502 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.72 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.077407649 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25903542075 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891263478235 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074182345353 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133798457719 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738122247644 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.