Dear Joe,
How are you? I hope you are in the pink of your health and high spirit. It’s a long time since we met. Well, the reason behind writing to you is about a job which I think really suitable for you.
The job which I found for you is to give basic knowledge to the students in the elementary school in France, owing to the fact that there are rarely do some adolescents who know about the most used language, English, in the world, and the timing is from 9 am to 5 pm and ofcourse there is holiday on weekends also pay is extremely good since most of the people earn 100 pounds per day, this job would pay 140 pounuds per day.
Last time, as you told me on email, you have no job from past few months and you are wondering a job in your native language in France, which is a really harculean task for you. I solved your problem since my friend, Nick, who is a professor in the elementary school in France, offered me a job to give extra classes to the oversea students, from Monday to Friday. I told him that I’m not interested in this work due to satisfaction with my current job, so I recommend him your name for the same job.
While I know you have good communication skills as well as you have masters degree in English language, it is the most beneficial work for your career so that you could settle down in this region and manage your current and forthcoming expenditures. One more thing is that it’s just a stone throw from your residential area. I hope you will accept my suggestion. Should you require any other detail regarding this job, I will really delighted to help you.
Looking for a prompt response from you.
Well wishes,
Mathilda
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Joe, How are you? I hope you are in the pink ...
^^^
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...owing to the fact that there are rarely do some adolescents who know about the mos...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, regarding, so, well, while, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 313.0 206.0 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34504792332 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33254407754 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546325878594 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 290.88556701 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.509192689 44.8134815571 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402811756791 0.216113520407 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148857113988 0.0766984524023 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098842026991 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240539670065 0.12726935374 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095662818529 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.