Write a letter to your friend inviting him her to your family party In your letter Explain why you are organizing the party Describe what you are planning to do Say how important it is to have your friend at the party

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter

– Explain why you are organizing the party.

– Describe what you are planning to do.

– Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.

Dear Jay,

Hope this letter finds you in good health! It’s the while since we met at your last anniversary in Melbourne. I thought of planning a get together on the occasion of my daughter’s first birthday therefore I’m writing this letter to invite you and your family to Indian in upcoming Christmas week. Let me explain in detail.

I’m planning to spend New Year’s Eve at beach in Goa and celebrate my daughter’s birthday and new year together. I have already decided the hotel and flight for our families and just need your confirmation before booking them.

Could you please cancel your all the plans of last week of December and fly to India. I’m badly missing the college days, where we used to party every weekend, because of which I thought of inviting you so we can sit together and remember those beautiful moments.

Meet you soon!

Your friend,

Sam

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Meet you soon! Your friend, Sam
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03947368421 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68536320709 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6615935871 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280084192846 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133080989558 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884844143273 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15847779841 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685586151669 0.0580467560999 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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