Dear Raman,
Hello, how are you? Hope to see you in good health and high spirits.
I am writing this letter to invite you to be part of the celebration at my residence on 21st of December. As i have already shared the news of my pregnancy with you, you will be glad to know that we are arranging a baby shower to get blessings for our baby.
Well, there will be the gathering of nearly fifty people including relatives and friends and it will start in the evening at 5 pm. Not to mention, you will get chance to satisfy your taste buds by enjoying Indian and Chinese foods at the dinner. I know its quite tempting for you! Besides this, my husband decided to organize some fun-games for the couples, so yes, there will be some games for the entertainment. I am sure you definitely won't miss those. One thing more, after cake-cutting, guests will enjoy dancing and drinks.
So, being my best friend, your presence will really make me happy. I need your assistance too to help me organize everything properly. As you are full of creative ideas, I wish you suggest me some themes for this occasion. Don't forget to bring your little princess along with you.
Start packing your stuff and come two days in advance. I won't listen to any of the excuses from your side.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours loving,
Kamal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 224, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54583333333 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33288314109 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6960773058 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1764705882 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1176470588 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70588235294 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278763479202 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985383588696 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491360194243 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13799026408 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481082127385 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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