Dear Mala,
I hope you are comfortable there as you moved already and left me here. I am feeling blue because of missing you, that is the reason why I am writing this letter
I will be in summer holiday next week. It would be awesome for us to meet each other. Itinerary has been prepared by me. By the way, I have wrapped a special gift for you. I am checking for the flight tickets now and will inform you as soon as possible once I got it.
Here is the plan. The trip will take its toll so I planned to stay for one night at Mercure Hotel when I arrive. Tomorrow morning, I will go by train to your hometown. Hoping that you could pick me up in there. I am sure we will be hungry that time so it would be incridible if we could eat together in the restaurant. The rest of the plan will be yours. I can not wait to meet you
Sincerely Yours,
Wulan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mala, I hope you are comfortable there as you ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... reason why I am writing this letter I will be in summer holiday next week. It...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.05813953488 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13342783615 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5414619457 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.6923076923 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2307692308 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239892096077 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850982566279 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704656100563 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18269779916 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832454320849 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.3 8.37731958763 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.38 8.71597938144 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.