Dear Mala,
I hope you are doing great. I am going out of the city with my husband for two weeks. I will be leaving tomorrow morning at 06.00 A.M and back on Thursday, 14th of March
Due to my vacation, I have no one to look after my house. As you have known, my relatives live far away from here. I would be over the moon if you could take care of it.
If you do not mind, I have some requests for you to do. I hope it will not make you in trouble. Please turn on the lamp when sky gets dark and turn it off when morning comes. Do not forget to lock the door when you leave my house. On Sunday, Garbage collector will come. I have prepared a gift for him as my gratitude. Could you please give it to him ? The gift is in my living room. Thank you very much for your help.
Yours Truly,
Wulan
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- You are planning a two weeks vacation and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away Write a letter to your neighbor In this letter Tell your neighbor that you are going away Ask you neighbor totake care of your house for you Explain w 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the city with my husband for two weeks. I will be leaving tomorrow morning at 06....
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
... be leaving tomorrow morning at 06.00 A.M and back on Thursday, 14th of March ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 648.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.9512195122 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.86538720417 2.54303337028 73% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9229097497 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 43.2 76.5299724578 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.9333333333 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294387410477 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112663112543 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913782604992 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179370390291 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615005626226 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.6 8.37731958763 31% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.17 70.7449484536 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.5 7.45979381443 34% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.45 8.71597938144 51% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.48 7.59969072165 72% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 41.2886597938 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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