Hello John ,
Hope you and your family are doing good . How are things at work ? Hope you like your new job at "Shell petroleum" . Raghu and I have recovered completely from Covid and are healthy now .
I heard you are travelling to Pune next month . I lived in Pune for nearly three years at the start of my career . So I can recommend a few places for you to visit during your weekend. There is a famous Ganesh temple called "dagudu seth" . People in Maharashtra are a pious about lord Ganesha. The Ganesh chaturthi , a famous festival also falls on next month . The streets of Pune will be lit up and festivity will be on the air . Although the city gets too crowded during these days .
Apart from the temple , you must visit the restaurant "wadeshwar" which sells delicious 'Dabeli' . Vada Pav (Indian version of burger) and Missal pav from the street vendors is also a treat .
Pune's public transportation is not up to the mark . The local busses are not frequent and not well connected . So it is better to hire a auto rickshaw or a cab. There are quite a few apps like 'Ola ' or 'uber' through which we can book a cab . One can find plenty of auto rickshaw on the streets for direct booking.
Wish you have a nice trip to Pune . And call me once you reach Pune safely .
Yours lovingly,
Aishwarya
- Write a letter to your friend who is visiting a city that you are familiar with 1 Describe to him the place orth visiting 2 Eating Options 3 Transport Options 78
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.... And call me once you reach Pune safely . Yours lovingly, Aishwarya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60337552743 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66716120312 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62447257384 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.8644578134 44.8134815571 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.5909090909 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.7727272727 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 2.54639175258 1021% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116017902877 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322847982907 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456614971733 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578112914185 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234451660185 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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