Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it

Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you about the issues i have with my computer system. It is running very slow which makes my work difficult. There has been pop-ups appearing on my screen detecting virus, may be because of too much data saved on the system or depending on the usage. I am so annoyed with the repeated advertisements of games and applications.
These are the problems which interrupts me while working on the computer. Iam barely able to catch up with my work beacuse of speed of the computer. It stucks in the middle which leads to restarting and sometimes it gets completely switched off. Because of this the my on going work on the system remains unsaved and then again i had to start from the beginning.
I would be really grateful to you if you fix these problems on my computer system without erasing any of my saved data. And please make it is early as possible within 2 days or so. Unless I get my system repaired , i kindly request you to provide me another computer with our software installed in it.
Looking to hear frrom you. Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Siddiqua.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about the iss...
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Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... detecting virus, may be because of too much data saved on the system or depending o...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtisements of games and applications. These are the problems which interrupts ...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...ompletely switched off. Because of this the my on going work on the system remains uns...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ly switched off. Because of this the my on going work on the system remains unsaved and ...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e system remains unsaved and then again i had to start from the beginning. ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in i had to start from the beginning. I would be really grateful to you if you...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s or so. Unless I get my system repaired , i kindly request you to provide me anot...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er with our software installed in it. Looking to hear frrom you. Thank you in ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hear frrom you. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, ...
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Line 6, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, Siddiqua.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, really, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55306785871 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4750740185 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1428571429 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211991264125 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695739871126 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638393759926 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100843984297 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05562309528 0.0580467560999 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.