Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the issues which I have been facing for the past two days while working from home. Thus, I apologized for the inconvenience caused in my roles and responsibility at my job.

The virus definitions have been not updated on my laptop due to the limited connectivity issues at my home for the last seven days because the Wifi line is getting installed in my colony. However, I have informed the Wifi vendor to complete the installation as early as possible.

Moreover, I am unable to finish up my work on time due to this issue. Although I am able to connect with the mobile hotspot, the internet bandwidth is not the same as the Wifi vendor. I am sorry for the delayed replies to the messages in the chatbox.

I have already informed the IT department about the issue. Fortunately, they have responded to my query and I have to go to the office tomorrow for installing the latest virus definitions. I am apologizing in advance for tomorrow because I will be unable to complete the tasks on time. I am hoping that you will understand my problems which I faced during my work hours.

I am looking forward to hearing from your soon.

Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you a...
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Line 9, column 25, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...the chatbox. I have already informed the IT department about the issue. Fortunately...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...which I faced during my work hours. I am looking forward to hearing from your...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65137614679 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70937484695 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545871559633 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1992080937 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14105749739 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569001063964 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524755591256 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769042758173 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491841897432 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.