You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house
say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend
suggest when and where you could meet your friend next
Dear Sahil,
I hope you are doing well. It was an amazing experience while spending a weekend at your new place. Anyhow, I’m planning for a holiday at Cuba resort for relaxing in the coming weekend. I was wondering if you could come along to enjoy a small vacation next weekend.
During our last meetup at your new house, I liked the neighborhood because it has serene surroundings. Also, the residents in your colony are mostly the families instead of bachelors which makes it a more healthy and clean area.
Moreover, I liked your new chef who has cooked delicious cuisines for me during my last visit to your new home. I’ve never eaten such a delicious curry chicken and salmon fish. Besides, the garden outside with a river view makes the place breathtaking to enjoy the view, especially while enjoying cocktails in the evening.
Since the last meetup was relaxing and pleasant for both of us, I was thinking to go outside the town to Cuba resort for a small holiday to feel the same way on our last meetup. Please let me know if you are interested to come on this holiday. So, I can finalize the bookings and inform you of the timings to leave for a holiday.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Regards,
Shwatank
- A neighbor recently invited to you a special party You intended to go but at the last minute were unable to attend Write a letter to your neighbor In your letter 1 apologize for not going to a party 2 explain why you didn t go 3 suggest a way to make up f 56
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world Do you think this is a positive or negative development 67
- You saw a brochure for a one week walking tour in the mountains You re very interested in taking part but you re not very fit and are worried you wouldn t be able to keep up Write to the tour operator In your letter Explain why you re interested in the to 87
- The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind However it has made little difference in most people s lives 56
- Some people think it s better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them Other people believe it s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ding a weekend at your new place Anyhow Im planning for a holiday at Cuba resort f...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...kes it a more healthy and clean area Moreover I liked your new chef who has cooked de...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...e during my last visit to your new home Ive never eaten such a delicious curry chic...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51818181818 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35757965256 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 220.0 16.3608247423 1345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 994.0 76.5299724578 1299% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 220.0 16.8248392259 1308% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 50.0 4.34317383033 1151% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229029970844 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229029970844 0.0766984524023 299% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129190619867 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446496328473 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 109.9 8.37731958763 1312% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -134.9 70.7449484536 -191% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 86.7 7.45979381443 1162% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.42 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.49 7.59969072165 230% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 8.62886597938 591% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 90.0 8.54432989691 1053% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 90.0 8.15463917526 1104% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.