Write a letter to your manager about a new colleague, who makes things difficult at work for all your team.
Describe why he/she makes it difficult.
Describe your feelings regarding the situation.
What do you want your manager to do about it?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to complain about Miss Uloma, the new colleague who is making life a living hell at work for every member of our team.
Our legal team is known for excellent work, and we're highly recommended for our reports at the end of the month. In the past few months, things have changed as a result of Miss Uloma in our team. She finds it difficult to write and file her reports or give account of minute from meetings we've had. She never goes out for pro bono or any of the sittings organized by the firm. In addition, we have noticed that as a result of her incompetence, the legal head of our department is currently facing trial on behalf of the team.
We are unhappy over her attitude to her work and the group as a whole. She has made us the laughing stock in the office and this is not acceptable by us, her team members. We work as a family and have called her on different occasion to advise her and she rendered abuses on us.
In light of this recent events, I write in agreement with my team members that, she should be removed from our group in order to restore peace amongst us. This will help us qualify for the next promotional exercise.
Yours Faithfully,
Esther Okoronkwo.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: LAUGHING_STOCK[1]
Message: Did you mean 'laughingstock'?
Suggestion: laughingstock
...e group as a whole. She has made us the laughing stock in the office and this is not acceptabl...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'in addition', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240458015267 0.220444632235 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.148854961832 0.167888034529 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0496183206107 0.0606518309736 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0152671755725 0.0506257000042 30% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.12213740458 0.118615021944 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152671755725 0.107062808482 143% => OK
Participles: 0.0458015267176 0.041066498444 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37036956884 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0190839694656 0.0385302599488 50% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00381679389313 0.00132118243153 289% => OK
Determiners: 0.0839694656489 0.0714148451538 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00763358778626 0.0191574576366 40% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00381679389313 0.00930345855455 41% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1241.0 1141.60824742 109% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.134020619 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44298245614 5.53046319177 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78085437643 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.276315789474 0.284621296913 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.179824561404 0.211203875043 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.118421052632 0.133321485273 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0789473684211 0.0843313296314 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37036956884 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622163163488 97% => OK
Word variations: 61.3846122156 62.8969750728 98% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.4300151701 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5866551263 44.7399317507 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.416666667 90.9928171075 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.4300151701 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.613754768223 41% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 36.9824561404 37.5504026743 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.53333333333 1.13073093955 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148715915643 0.331212695627 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11256605362 0.0927372745006 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0722518054967 0.0736520305886 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.628910018479 0.579516596996 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17220635978 0.180689518051 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648448662246 0.122183219658 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404139415335 0.0765303033291 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260919995647 0.211926503985 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0569029722731 0.0737400523855 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108548750287 0.203819188451 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441026325579 0.067151250289 66% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.45360824742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.48453608247 404% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.73195876289 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 1.03092783505 388% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.56701030928 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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