Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:•Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.•Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.•Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
• Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
• Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request you to grant me leave for the next two weeks to finish my certification, which will be helpful to my career and the company in long run.

I can compensate the time off provided to me by working in office on weekends. Additionally, I am also willing to work in night shifts for one month, thereby my actual working hours will be more than the required working hours.

On successful completion of this exam, i will be qualified to operate on critical work issues, in the current project I am working. Hence, clearing this exam will help me work more efficiently and increase my productivity. As such, the project can be completed before the estimated time, thereby, the revenue of the organisation increases.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Alex Peralta

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request you to grant me ...
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Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... On successful completion of this exam, i will be qualified to operate on critica...
^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Alex Peralta
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 143.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85314685315 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81364051321 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657342657343 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7768457719 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210263067752 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908357902386 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278531862787 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105922516663 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284227311119 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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