Write a letter to your teachers In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows Dear

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter

describe the situation

explain why you cannot continue at this time

say what action you would like to take

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ................. ,

Dear John,

Hope you are doing well. As you know that I'm working as a Software engineer in Prodapt Solutions for a full time position. It is being diffucult for me to manage my work while attending your part -time course.
At the time of joining this course, the job was bit easier and I was able to manage both course as well as my job. But later, my manager asked me to handle multiple targets which made me to sit late nights and complete the tasks.
I understand that the course is very crucial to me and it adds high value to my career. But, at this point of time, my job is my atmost priority. So, I request you to either postpone this course for the next month or refund the advance amount which I paid you at my initial sessions.

Hope you understand my situation and kindly do the needful.

Yours Sincerely,
Sai shiva

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, Hope you are doing well. As you know tha...
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Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...pe you are doing well. As you know that Im working as a Software engineer in Proda...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...are engineer in Prodapt Solutions for a full time position. It is being diffucult for me ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hile attending your part -time course. At the time of joining this course, the ...
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Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...ime of joining this course, the job was bit easier and I was able to manage both co...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...er and I was able to manage both course as well as my job. But later, my manager asked me ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t late nights and complete the tasks. I understand that the course is very cru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36305732484 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23504264736 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643312101911 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5608660818 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1776795773 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844101443437 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549232654309 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111502662348 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049212251937 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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