Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Mr. Sinha
I regretfully have to inform you that I would want to discontinue the part-time evening course with you.
The reason for the above being is I being promoted to senior post which brings lots of responsibilities and tasks alongside in my current organization due to the big structural change, moreover, relocating to my home town Jaipur for 6 months also doesn't really help as it makes this whole process of the evening learning a bit too taxing.
Nevertheless, I definitely would not want to go your all hard work wasted so I have decided to continue the classes once I am done with the current project which should be around Oct. this year.
In the end, I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for all the hard work you have put in for tghis course, I reassure you that none of tha would go wasted.
Thanks for your guidance always,
Yours sincerly
Swodha Jha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...o my home town Jaipur for 6 months also doesnt really help as it makes this whole proc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, nevertheless, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66875 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60287551325 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.194796202 44.8134815571 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.4 76.5299724578 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 16.8248392259 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212742485304 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111342762319 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635801655519 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117795914802 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692571564146 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 8.37731958763 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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