Write a lettervto principal of a college offer college in which you got accepted and say that you cannot start your courses .In your letter --write which courses had your flight for
why cannot you start
ask about the future courses availability
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I cannot commence my classes in Business Study course in which I had been registered last month . My enrollment number is B 69 874.
Actually I want to continue, yet there are some unavoidable circumstances owing to which it has become next to impossible for me to study for next few months. Since my grandfather who has been living in Canada for many years is suffering from heart disease, I need to go there to look after him .
As soon as I will come back in India I would like to take admission in your college once again.Thus , I would like to request you to let me aware regarding the courses that would be available after six months.
I would be grateful to you for this act.
Yours faithfully,
Maria Roy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n which I had been registered last month . My enrollment number is B 69 874. Ac...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...se, I need to go there to look after him . As soon as I will come back in India...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...ke admission in your college once again.Thus , I would like to request you to let me...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dmission in your college once again.Thus , I would like to request you to let me a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, regarding, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 645.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 142.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54225352113 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59475369353 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683098591549 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5392781773 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1428571429 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264500348871 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996201386039 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792169753763 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135848417898 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629883599164 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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