Writing a letter to building manager regarding a problem parking your bicycle.
When you started to use bicycle to go to work
What the problem is
Suggesting the solution of the problem.
Dear Sir or madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with an availability of parking bicycles in the office building. Since last month, I started commuting to office by bicycle for health and environmental benefits and leave it outside the workspace which is insecure as well as illegal.
Let me explain my problem in more detail. The trouble started on the first day when I came office on the bicycle and the building guard denied me parking inside as there is no bicycle stand, however, there is large space available for four-wheelers and bikes. Since then I have been parking my cycle in the external area of the campus which is allotted to the government for plantation.
I would like to suggest that you review this clearly unsatisfactory situation immediately so that I could securely park my cycle inside the premises along with other vehicles. You should advise the guard to allow parking bicycles on the left of the space for bikes which is usually free.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Jay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01142857143 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82967366691 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0521158593 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4444444444 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196739176315 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791910198223 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345834249931 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110593023369 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302490286134 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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