Writing Task 1 - General You are going on a month training programme to Canada and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organiser.
Write a letter to the Training Organiser
expressing your interest in the role
requesting more information about it
explaining what experience you have
Dear Sir and Madam,
A week ago I saw online information from your website that you required a professional role as a social events organizer for the Training Organizer. I am excited to participate in this environment by managing the training program next month in Canada. I have a few years of experience in this role and I believe this is a wonderful opportunity for me and would be quite helpful to my career. Therefore, I am hoping that you would permit me to involve myself in the role of the social events’ organizer.
I have been involved in many works since I graduated from my university and participated in a number of social events in the university such as organizing a Christmas party for all of the students. In my duties, I am frequently responsible for organizing important events and making sure there are successful meetings.
I enjoy doing these roles and I would be the right one for this position. Therefore, request you to send me more details about organizing social events. I would like to get some information.
1. How large would be the meeting?
2. What kinds of guests are expected at the event?
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Emma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
...equired a professional role as a social events organizer for the Training Organizer. I...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...uch as organizing a Christmas party for all of the students. In my duties, I am frequently...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Emma
^^^
Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Yours sincerely, Emma
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78095238095 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87076119544 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3011984057 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2307692308 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202790201411 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746321251853 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381784497082 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895868048814 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554841037256 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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