Dear Sir,
I am elated to be writing to you this letter. I cannot express the gratitude towards you in a few words, but I hope you can relate to my feelings. Allow me to elaborate.
You along with your crew had hosted a talk show at the Botanical Club in Lhasa, North Africa on 29 May 2018 on the Refugee crisis that is looming over our society in the present times. As you did not stay back after the talk, the people could not thank you personally for all the great efforts put in by you and your crew. It was not the first talk that the club had hosted over the said issue, but it was the first talk that had left a deep impact on our souls.
The talk would just be something that you feel or your own views. It was the way you had presented the whole talk that mattered. It was an immersive experience for us all at the club. You did a phenomenal job with the talk. We are anticipating that you will host another talk event in coming future as the turnout of people was larger than it was expected.
I have been fortunate enough to attend some of the other talk events hosted by you in the recent past and further, I have seen some events on YouTube. It is not the aforementioned event that I liked, but I have liked all the talk shows that have been hosted by you. As such, on behalf of our club, I propose to you to hold another talk show at the club on “The issues that the women face nowadays.” The club is looking forward to hosting you again in near future. I hope your Talkathon Tour is a great success as always. I look forward to seeing you again in near future.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am elated to be writing to you this le...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... I have been fortunate enough to attend some of the other talk events hosted by you in the ...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ur Talkathon Tour is a great success as always. I look forward to seeing you again in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in in near future. Yours faithfully, Brad Jason
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 314.0 206.0 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20063694268 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22295959318 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515923566879 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3051100975 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5882352941 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.47058823529 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23283171845 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762809288205 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052095642464 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142852801734 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109067910646 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.08 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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