You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter•Describe the item•Explain where and when you left it•Say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you the letter to report an item as missing. Allow me to elaborate.

I have been a frequent user of Virgin Train Services and on 29th June, 2018, I was using the services of your company to travel to Edinburgh Waverley by the 10:15 AM service from London Euston. I was carrying my Nikola XP-181 DSLR Camera which was kept in a Red Jansport Bag. The bag contains my identity card as well.

I was seated in coach 11, sequence no 14. Since, I was running late to catch a connecting train as such I de-boarded the moment train stopped without checking for my belongings. However, I apprehend to have left the bag in the overhead compartment of the seat.

Moreover, I want you to circulate the information of the missing item with the aforementioned description among your staff. As, the camera holds very special place in my life as it belonged to my great grandfather. In addition, I request your company to return the item, in case, it is found and I will be happy to reimburse the money spent on shipping.

I hope for a positive and expeditious reply.

Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'June 2018'.
Suggestion: June 2018
...er of Virgin Train Services and on 29th June, 2018, I was using the services of your compa...
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Line 11, column 197, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: great-grandfather
...l place in my life as it belonged to my great grandfather. In addition, I request your company to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64039408867 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69336073437 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64039408867 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8689831569 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4615384615 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184138907952 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547668179514 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729562083739 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984837498457 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088743533542 0.0580467560999 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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