Writing task 1You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In you letter· Provide Information about yourself· Give details of your previous work experience· Say why the co

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Writing task 1

You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In you letter

· Provide Information about yourself

· Give details of your previous work experience

· Say why the company should consider your for the job

Dear Sir,

I am writing the letter to apply for the Administration Assistant job, advertised in the newspaper The Hindu. My name is vishal anand, age 38 years old, live in Ghaziabad. I am double master candidate; the first degree Master in Economics, the second degree Master in Business Studies which fulfills the job criteria of the education.

As far as question is concerned about an experience, I hold 10 years of experience in retail sector and worked as cashier in supermarket. However, upon not getting success, I moved to the customer service in bank and taken contract jobs of short term and long term basis. Currently, I am working in challenging position as manager in Oracle Company.

In question to selecting me, I would say that an experience and education is the mandatory requirement which I am fulfilling. Moreover, the work location is near to me which will help me to do overtime if needed. It will save commute time and can give more time to company.

I believe of getting reply soon.

Sincerely

Vishal anand

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99435028249 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81969018686 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4604408325 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3636363636 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17277516174 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550877249381 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684741404231 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787397525343 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536706314155 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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