Dear Sir,
I hope you are having a great day. I'm writing to inform you that I wouldn't be able to take the job which I agreed to start over the summer. This is due to some reasons beyond my power.
My result for the Senior West African School Certificate Examination is out and I passed! This is a special moment for me as I'm going to further my education. My parents are so excited, although we haven't resumed yet for the first term.
Furthermore, I want to let you know how sorry I am. Please accept my apology. May I say that I've been looking forward to this position; we don't mean any harm, whenever an unforseen circumstance of this nature comes up.
Next summer is by the corner, so I'd love to fill up that position as long as it is vacant. If I'll be given a second opportunity to work for you, then I wouldn't miss that spot for anything.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Grant
- Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly services information tasks Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 56
- Some people believe that certain old buildings are worth preserving more than other buildings What type of old buildings are worth preserving Do the advantages of preserving these buildings outweigh the disadvantages 67
- Throughout the history people dream to build a perfect society while they haven t agreed how the ideal society would be like What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society How do people do to achieve an ideal society 61
- Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison What do you think are the causes of this What possible solutions can you suggest 61
- The number of TV programs is growing day by day Some people say it is good as it gives people more choices while others say it affects the quality of TV programs Discuss both the views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope you are having a great day. Im wr...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... I hope you are having a great day. Im writing to inform you that I wouldnt be...
^^
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...at day. Im writing to inform you that I wouldnt be able to take the job which I agreed ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...sed! This is a special moment for me as Im going to further my education. My paren...
^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... My parents are so excited, although we havent resumed yet for the first term. Fur...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...lease accept my apology. May I say that Ive been looking forward to this position; ...
^^^
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...en looking forward to this position; we dont mean any harm, whenever an unforseen ci...
^^^^
Line 9, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...p. Next summer is by the corner, so Id love to fill up that position as long a...
^^
Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...at position as long as it is vacant. If Ill be given a second opportunity to work f...
^^^
Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ond opportunity to work for you, then I wouldnt miss that spot for anything. I look...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Adam Grant
^^^^^
Line 15, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est. Yours faithfully, Adam Grant
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, may, second, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39548022599 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44334443169 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694915254237 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6559924516 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8333333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211618823315 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727633069548 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813169335932 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116740949569 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957006594964 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.