you and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:1. give details of your visit to the restaurant2. explain the r

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you and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services.

Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:

1. give details of your visit to the restaurant

2. explain the reason for the celebration

3. say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Sir,

Hope you are doing well.

I am writing you this letter to express my thanks and appreciation for the excellent service and delicious food that I had at your restaurant last sunday. Choosing this place turned out to be the best decision and a beautiful memory of spending time with my friends.

me along with my friends had come to 'The Public Cafe' on sunday around 8 PM to celebrate my promotion I was certainly confused as there are plenty of places in the nearby areas however, after checking the amazing online reviews I thought of giving it a try.

I am very pleased to share that me and my pals are extremely happy and wonderful experience. Throughout the dinner, the staff was courteous, well-mannered and explained us the specialities for the day. we had a vegetarian platter followed by Italian food along with some cocktails, which was totally worth the money we paid, considering its presentation and taste. Moreover, we also liked the vibrant ambience and <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">live music which created a joyful atmosphere. </span>

Finally, I want to thank you and all the staff again for making this a memorable night for me and my mates. we would definitely love to visit here again and try all the other delicacies.

thank you

Piyush

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... and try all the other delicacies. thank you Piyush
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, moreover, so, well, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02752293578 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06055444635 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660550458716 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2690854057 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184484445167 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653818454996 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590053147556 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892284882308 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466462095071 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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