Dear Mr. Green,
Hi, my name is Jane Williams and I am your tenants in your apartment No 27J on Klein Street. I am writing to complain about the bad condition of some furniture which are part of our rental agreement. I am hoping that you would replace or fix them soon.
In this regard I have to describe the specification of the furniture. The legs of the dining table are uneven so it is not usable for us. Also the fridge’s temperature is too low that all the vegetables are freezing and the problem is that the temperature control does not work properly. Besides apparently a key has been broken in the bedroom’s keyhole therefore it cannot be locked.
I would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter. I request you to replace the table with a new one and have someone to repair the fridge soon and also a locksmith to fix the keyhole.
Thank you in advance.
Yours Respectfully,
Jane Williams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... are uneven so it is not usable for us. Also the fridge's temperature is too lo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, if, so, therefore, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71951219512 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80257063097 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5641544084 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3636363636 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161972935486 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574518154292 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039600221172 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949317460827 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480341624433 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.