You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like and ask them how much the weekend will cost. Also inquire about the activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to make necessary arrangements for the stay during weekend at you hotel. Also I would like to enquire regarding the sightseeing and activities within proximity of the hotel.
My family including parents, two brothers and myself would be visiting Goa on 4th May i.e. Friday. We would be checking in at 5 pm and would checkout on 7th May early in the morning. Our preference would be double bed rooms with AC, refrigerator and television. However, an extra bed would be required in one of the rooms since we all three siblings will share the same room. It would be really nice to reserve room with balcony attached having sea side view. Kindly email the cost of rooms during weekend at pk@xyz.com and the overall estimates including taxes.
Additionally kindly send us the list of sites located near your hotel as well as family oriented activities. Since we will be visiting Goa only for 3 days and 3 nights, it won’t be possible for us to explore far off places.
I look forward hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, may, really, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83957219251 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61055694788 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668449197861 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1328375244 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4166666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291085007122 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941754949053 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481452170929 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160064864421 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713932403559 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.