You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like and ask them how much the weekend will cost

Dear Sir or Madam,

This letter has been written to make necessary arrangements for the stay during this weekend at your esteemed hotel and requesting you for the details .

My family including my parents , 2 sisters and myself would be visiting Miami on 2nd of August on Friday. We would be checking in at 4:00pm and would be planning to checkout on 7th of August in the morning .Our first preference would be 2 rooms on first floor in case of no elevators . Then moving further an additional bed in one room for ease of adjustment. A television and additional blankets for both rooms. In addition to all this , both rooms with sea view balconies is what preferred.

Moving further, kindly send a list of near by tourist spots as taking shortage of time into consideration , we want to explore all the near by tourist attractions and in addition list of all the hotel expenses on my email id lhf@xyz.com.

I look forward hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,

John Keats

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... for both rooms. In addition to all this , both rooms with sea view balconies is w...
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... you. Yours Faithfully, John Keats
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, then, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81176470588 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68935922874 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7069704434 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8888888889 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19114057321 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667910382139 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557914753046 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110543851955 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608229379167 0.0580467560999 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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