You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know: when you will be arriving and leavingwhat type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will costinqu

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You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.

Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know:

when you will be arriving and leaving

what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost

inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to let you know that me and my family are planning for a trip to Goa and prefer to stay in a beach property like yours. So we would like you to make necessary arrangements as required for 2 Adults and 1 child (10 years old).

We intend to reach the place around 2pm on 21st December, spend 2 nights in your resort, and would be grateful if you accept our request of late check out on 23rd December. We would prefer a deluxe sea view room with an extra bed from my kid inclusive of breakfast. Could you also brief us on the rates that it would cost?

We are curious to learn about different amenities that we would enjoy during our stay. Through what we have researched online, we understand that the hotel has 2 pools and indoor gaming facilities available. Apart from that we would also like you to guide us through different sightseeing and interesting places that are close by.

Waiting for a prompt reply.

Thanks and Regards,

Kutub.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, apart from, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53888888889 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36554485672 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677777777778 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6528670073 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215915120092 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802320878268 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572786766797 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12550381095 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747622014101 0.0580467560999 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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