You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different
nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper requesting
him to publish information about this:-
- What activities you have planned
- When the first meeting takes place and where
Dear Sir,
I am Balzhan Issakhanova, the president of local Toastmasters Club. I am writing with request to place an announcement in your newspaper about our new club in Istanbul to raise awareness about the club, get the maximum participation and support.
Toastmasters International is a non-profit organization that empowers individuals to become more effective communicators and leaders. By attending bi-weekly meetings Toastmasters members can improve their speaking and leadership skills in a supportive atmosphere. In addition, it is a great opportunity to improve English as meetings are conducted in English and attended by people from different countries.
The first meeting is on 6th of November 2018 at 7.00 pm and the consecutive meetings will be held on every first and third Tuesdays of the month at the same time. The venue is Hotel Kadikoy in big conference room on the second floor.
Thanking you in anticipation,
Yours faithfully,
Balzhan Issakhanova
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, third, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56953642384 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30177449822 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708609271523 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.882635906 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.125 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133383389145 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462465775165 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361736291636 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793203142151 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335109166616 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 8.71597938144 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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