Dear Mrs. Smith,
I hope you are doing well and everything is fine at school too. I am writing this letter to request you for a reference letter for the job.
As, I have completed graduation in computer science and now I have applied for a job of software programmer at Hewlett-Packard, a well established company.The package, they are offering to freshers, is as per my expectations. Luckily, I got an interview call from their side and I was asked to bring the reference letter as well. I am very excited about this job as my career will be getting started from a field in which I keep keen interest.
I will be obliged if you mention the details about my performances in academic, sports and other activities because it will help me to get this job.
Yours sincerely,
Jaden
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mrs. Smith, I hope you are doing well and everything...
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...to freshers, is as per my expectations. Luckily, I got an interview call from th...
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... their side and I was asked to bring the reference letter as well. I am very exci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 651.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88708418686 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664285714286 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7300886374 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21705004178 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905804986412 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924314684564 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150725164372 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845660493038 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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