You have a problem with a neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter. Describe the problem. say how long it has been a problem.. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am your next door neighbour and the reason for inscribing this letter is the inconvenience due to the high volume of music from your home that I and my family have to endure every night. I know your son is learning music and he is very passionate to become a disc jockey. But, as you know, I have two school going children and my sick mother is suffering from illness. Since, they have to go to bed early but this loud music noise makes them really disturbed and uncomfortable as well.

I am facing this difficulty from couple of months. Initially, I talked to your son but he did not make any notice I guess. Now, I want you to speak to him about it and tell him to shift his practice timings from night to day at least or the other solution is, you can make his room sound proof. The later suggestion is better but I leave it upto you to act accordingly.

I hope you will consider my problem seriously.

Yours sincerely,
John.

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, really, so, well, at least, i guess, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34444444444 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39819891266 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661111111111 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3098517766 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207721673226 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755462449191 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507893757753 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139360521151 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331967121744 0.0580467560999 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.