You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to former teacher.
In your letter
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your could put in the reference.
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. It's been so long since we last met and had some nice conversation.
this letter is in reference of a job for which i am very keen. i came to know about this position through one of my friends who works for the same organisation. The opening - global Sourcing Manager is with a renowed company known as Facebook where i will be handling LATAM and US region. I was looking for such an opportunity. It will give me an experience of global region and will add value to my profile. I am confident that i can make a big difference to the company to settle their business in that province.
Requesting you to provide a reference letter mentioning my trustworthiness, enthusiasm and subject knowledge. Basis this letter they will take my candidature ahead. I would need to have this letter in next one week, 26th December, 2018.
Thanks in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Nisha Bhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. Its been so lon...
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Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ast met and had some nice conversation. this letter is in reference of a job for...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...et and had some nice conversation. this letter is in reference of a job for whi...
^^^^
Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tter is in reference of a job for which i am very keen. i came to know about this...
^
Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ence of a job for which i am very keen. i came to know about this position throug...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ence of a job for which i am very keen. i came to know about this position throug...
^
Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...renowed company known as Facebook where i will be handling LATAM and US region. I...
^
Line 4, column 430, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...alue to my profile. I am confident that i can make a big difference to the compan...
^
Line 4, column 516, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...settle their business in that province. Requesting you to provide a reference le...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 222, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'December 2018'.
Suggestion: December 2018
...have this letter in next one week, 26th December, 2018. Thanks in advance. Yours sincer...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... December, 2018. Thanks in advance. Yours sincerely, Nisha Bhan
^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanks in advance. Yours sincerely, Nisha Bhan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79536953547 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3879954384 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3846153846 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3846153846 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129109238067 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451573483523 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455643049127 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531192358869 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485226628206 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.15 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.