You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday.
2. Explain why you must change your plans.
3. Suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear Mark,
hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you about a sudden change in my plans in regards to the upcoming holiday. Allow me to explain the situation.
To elucidate I was looking forward to our adventurous trip to Jim Corbett Park in the Himalayas. As you are aware that we had been planning this trip for the past 3 months to rejuvenate ourselves from the hectic work schedule and explore the natural beauty of the Himalayan range however there is a change in the plan. The major reason for the change is due to an upcoming technical seminar in Japan for which I need to travel for a week. Although I tried to reschedule my travel however the company management requested me to travel as I have detailed knowledge of the products, therefore, would be able to present the technical aspects of the products in a much confident manner.
Lastly, I would like to tell you that there is no need to get disheartened as I have already checked with our travel agent and requested him to reschedule our holiday in the month of June. I hope this re-arrangement will be acceptable. looking forward to your response.
Warm wishes
Saad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...m you about a sudden change in my plans in regards to the upcoming holiday. Allow me to expla...
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Line 6, column 237, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...this re-arrangement will be acceptable. looking forward to your response. Warm wishes...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, lastly, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61463414634 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65661599904 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2344290119 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198818723249 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745833580825 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778743922589 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149199685174 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542996361398 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.