Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter:
a. Invite him/her to a public event in your country.
b. Describe the public event
c. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit.
Dear Mike,
How have you been? it has been a long time since we last met. I am writing to invite you for an interesting five-day event on "healthy lifestyle" by renowned nutritionist Jim Bailey.
To elucidate the event will take place in Bangkok from 25th July to 30th July at Swissotel. The event will cover both theoretical and practical aspects of eating a healthy diet and its impact on our health in the longer run. Additionally, yoga and meditation sessions and techniques will be taught to the instructors which can be helpful in relieving stress. Although the event was supposed to run for only three days but later on at a special request of participants it was extended to five days. In the end, a seminar will be provided by Jim Bailey who will share his valuable thoughts on methods to lead a healthy and happy lifestyle. In my opinion, attending this event is a once in a lifetime opportunity for gaining knowledge and applying the same methods to relieve our stressful lives.
Lastly, after the event, I have planned a vacation to Krabi which is a beautiful island on the southern tip of Thailand. The vacation will not only rejuvenate your mind and body but will be a good chance to explore the local culture.
Looking forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Best wishes
Saad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, How have you been? it has been a long ti...
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Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
Dear Mike, How have you been? it has been a long time since we last met....
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponse and seeing you soon. Best wishes Saad
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, look, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75982532751 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73820367883 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646288209607 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3051455468 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8461538462 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168046338518 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540791827953 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441131591781 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114310687221 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328005289361 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.