You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:Give details of the jobExplain why it is important to youSuggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
Give details of the job
Explain why it is important to you
Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

Dear Mr. Nabil,
I am one of your senior students from two years ago, I am writing for an assistant from your side, since it is my first job that I am applying to and they requested to provide them with some information.

The job that I am applying to is ICT manager for an international corporation, overseas. Working for them on several environmental projects and requires from to visit several sites and travel to far places, for assisting the team.

For me it is important to succeed in the interview and get this job offer, since it is my first experience outside the country, and I am looking forward for another challenge in my career.

It would be appreciable if you can provide me with a letter of reference as soon as possible, includes my results, final project and the achievements that I received during these years, addition to my discipline, relationship and attitude in class and with my colleagues.

Thank you in advance, I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely Yours,
Student

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86255390797 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.6756633244 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.142857143 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13720034459 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580165788063 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299611090731 0.0603063233224 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724816501641 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164674859617 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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